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Runnin' like we own this place by A-wild-Day-appeared Runnin' like we own this place by A-wild-Day-appeared
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A little drawing of Maple to test out the tablet~ c: LOVIN IT.
I reallllllyyyyy like this drawing. She looks like a wolf, even though she's a german shepherd .w. But thats the best german shepherd I've ever drawn. So Im really proud of this.
AND HER COLORS ARE ACTUALLY SIMILAR THIS TIME 8D

Also, critiques maybe? owo First tiiimmeee 8DD
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HEY DAY I'M VERY BAD AT CRITIQUE'S BUT HERE WE GO.
Face: The eyes need to be abit fatherer apart from the muzzle. And the head shape needs to be abit more- rounder?? But everything else is good c:
Body: Lovin it but it's kinda really fat XD
Front legs: The muscle at the top needs to be thinner
Back legs: They need to be longer and the paws need to be curled in. ANd the hind needs to be longer, you know the part where it connects the leg to the body? Yeah that part. Oh and the legs seem abit stiff you know?
tail: is perfectly fine! c:
SORRY IF THIS IS REALLY BAD DAY IM SO SORRY //SHOT
What do you think?
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Please note, I do NOT use stars to critique things, so ignore them. I critique things that need to be critiqued, not the "chosen" things.

=Anatomy=
Head and Face:
-The nose, lips, and chin seem to be a bit too rounded, even for a canine. Try to make them a bit less curved.
-The eye is a bit too far up for it to be correctly positioned on the head, as the from corner of the eye should meet up with the corner of the nose. Also a small note, there should be at least a small portion of white visible in the eye.
-The hair on the top of the head is fine, but the way it is drawn you cannot tell where the fur begins and where the skill ends. Maybe draw a very few, thin lines where the hair begins? This will be shown in a red line I will include at the end of this critique.

Body:
-Where the chest ends and begins around the left forearm seems to dip in slightly, and expand back out unnaturally.
- The back of the neck seems to be okay, but the front seems to dip in a bit too far for the "muscles" of the canine to freely and comfortably move.
-The tail looks good how it is!

Arms and Legs:
-The "bicep" of the left forearm, where it is more against the body that the rest of the arm, seems to bulge a bit more than it should. It gives a kind of effect where the arm seems to have a large abscess of fat.
-The toes on all of the limbs are a bit too round and lumpy, when canine toes are a bit more like rounded rectangles.
-Canines do not have retractable claws, so therefor claws are always visible. Dewclaws are also included on the little "thumb" canines have on their forelegs.

Redline: [link]
Hope this helps!
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